First off,
the articles that both Ricky and Michael used are quite long, but pretty
relevant to your topic. The two
authors of the articles you both chose had some really insightful knowledge and
ideas about the politics of Vietnam and its policies. The only problem I had is that there seems to be no or
little critique from both of your perspectives about these articles. These articles present some arguments
that can be challenged and analyzed which were missing from the presentation. I think that if you two look at some of
the points that these articles make and analyze or critique them, it would make
your paper a lot more interesting.
In
terms of the presentation itself, there were a lot of information that were
taken directly from the article.
It distracted students from listening to your presentation because they
were either busy trying to copy the information as fast as they can or trying
to read the whole writing. This
really made it hard for many of us to understand the presentation because there
was either too much information given or too little (both powerpoint and
presenting wise). Another problem
with having the information directly from the article is that it doesn’t
necessarily show the audience how you feel about the claims on the
articles. For the research paper,
your argument should be really obvious so that it is easier to understand why
your ideas are important.
As
for suggestions for your research paper, you both should definitely include
more than one scholarly article pertaining to your topic. I understand that for the presentation,
you were only required to give two articles, but it is important that you use
more than one person’s argument about politics in Vietnam. This will not only give you two more to
write about, but it will also make your argument and paper stronger if you can
critique/analyze others who’s written about similar topics too.
Now
on the bright side, I like how you both tried to try it into Vietnamese
Americans and how it affects them.
Although there should have been a little more emphasis on why this topic
is important to Vietnamese Americans, I felt that the examples that you both
gave in class are pretty good. And
so, this leads to my question that I have for the two of you: How will understanding the politics of
Vietnam benefit Vietnamese/ Vietnamese Americans here?
As for Tien,
your article seemed long, but it was really interesting so that made it a fast
read for me. I thought that the
article you chose tied in pretty well with your presentation. Although I didn't specifically understand your
position in the topic, I felt that the analysis you made about the topic and
the article somewhat indicate your argument. In the research paper, it would be very helpful if you
specifically state your position just to make it easier to follow.
Based
on your presentation style, I thought that it made things easier for us to
write down important points because we didn’t have to stare at something and
copy it. By doing this, we all had
to really listen to what you were saying which, in a sense, made your
presentation more interesting.
As
for suggestions, I think that you should emphasize more about the United
Nations or other organizations have directed their attention to (or not
directed) to these Amerasians or children of war. This will really bring out more attention to your topic and
also lead to how Southeast Asians here should be aware of this issue. With this, you will need more than one
article that shows the government’s attention (or lack of) to this political
problem. Another suggestion is
trying to find stories of these Amerasians who have experienced conflicts of
displacement and identity confusion.
I know that you brushed up on this in your presentation, but if you
elaborate more on this, you can tie this in to why it is important for
Southeast Asian Americans to become aware and address this problem to the
government. With that being said,
my one question for you is: What
are solutions that the SEA (Southeast Asian) communities have done or should do
to help with this problem?