For
the group that presented on Hmong Culture and Identity, I think that the
presentation compliments the research that the group is working on. It presents some possible explanations
of why Hmong men have behind Hmong women in terms of education and careers. Although they did not remember their
exact research question, I think that the article that they analyzed and their
presentation offer some important points that would be helpful for them when
they write their research paper.
In
terms of the overall presentation, I think that despite the little time that
they had for their presentation (SORRY!), they still did a great job of going
over everything. As both a Hmong
male/female and college students, these two presenters were able to offer their
own personal experiences to bolster the analysis that they made from the
reading. However, it would be
better if there were also able to get some information/data from other Hmong
students on campus who can also add on to their research. So as a suggestion, the Hmong Student
Union on campus is a great start to conducting more research for their
paper. Other Southeast Asian
organizations on campus also have Hmong students who are involved in that can
also help them out. For example, I
know that SAFE’s Outreach program mentor high school and middle school students
in Sacramento, so as an outreach coordinator (Boon), I think that you can use
some of your students as examples.
For
my group presentation, we spent too much time looking through the clips and videos
that it made it hard for us to present all our analysis. That wasn’t the main issue though. Our main problem was that everything
was really unorganized. I didn’t
know how to set up my laptop with the projector, so that took up twenty minutes
of our presentation. Even though
we used a powerpoint for our presentation, we weren’t organized with how we
presented the information. Hue and
I did not go over on how much information we were going to give about each
points our presentation, some of our personal references/insights took up a lot
of the presentation time. But I
was really glad that the class had a lot to ask during our presentation. What I found really difficult with our
presentation is that we didn’t have the time to offer a clearer background knowledge
on the religion itself. If we did
this, the class would have a better understanding of our research. Then again, this backgroun knowledge
should have been incorporated in my video clip (which it was, until I accidentally
deleted the whole scene while editing).
Honestly,
I think that the organization of my presentation really made it hard for the
students to understand what I am researching about. Not only that, but my research participants are really
uneven since I mainly have responses from the second generation. So with the rest of the time that I
have left for the research, I will have to conduct more interviews and balance
out this sample size. As for my
analysis, because I have such a small sample size, I really need to organize
and improve what I have so that audiences can have a better understanding of
the research.
-Brenda Vue
Helpful comments and good introspection. Hope the feedback helps with research. -Prof. Valverde 4/4
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